Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

 


1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

www - variety of locations , industry , good cinematography , good opening shot

ebi - make some shots longer , better transitions , more shots of waterloo and the sunset 



2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.

www - going into central london , match on action , performance aspect 

ebi - more shots of waterloo and a sunset , better transitions , make it longer 

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

fairly well - many aspects of it i performed but others need to be included or improved further 

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

my pacing needs to be improved , i need more shots / longer shots but my overall idea and concept is good with the theme of London and that being the main focus of my music video 

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.

I will make it longer to get it to a minute 

i will include more shots of waterloo and sunset shots

i will improve the match on action at the start to make it work better 

i will use better transitions 




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