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Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

  1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. www - variety of locations , industry , good cinematography , good opening shot ebi - make some shots longer , better transitions , more shots of waterloo and the sunset  2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. www - going into central london , match on action , performance aspect  ebi - more shots of waterloo and a sunset , better transitions , make it longer  3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent ? fairly well - many aspects of it i performed but others need to be included or improved further  4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project? my pacing needs to be imp...