Ignite presentation learner response

 


1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

www

Good use of bullet points 

good audience demographics and psycho graphics

media language eg colour scheme typography

good concept and logo 

brand identity with drink and merch


EBI

Avoid watermarked images 

too many photos 

dont stretch photos 

elaborate on points 




2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

www - I thought the brand identity i created was good with the drink , logo and merchandise. i thought i also showed a clear plan for what people can expect from my website, tiktoks and overall concept 

ebi - i read of the board too much and should've addressed the audience, i could've mentioned more theorists when talking about representations and the audience   






3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 



I have since updated my statement of intent to make it over 500 words and providing more information for the audience. Now i think my concept has enough clarity and is appropriate for  the audience i have specified in my statement of intent. The three tiktoks are easy to film with my limited resources. i will add more theorists and key words into my statement of intent to make it of a higher quality 

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